I wandered lonely as a cloud
Screaming the words fuck you out loud
As, like the night, she walked in beauty
I wished someone would just come along and shoot me
As I, in the wood, took the road less travelled
I sat and cried as my mind unravelled
And as we talked between the rooms
I closed my eyes and succumbed to the fumes
The end🌺🌺🌺😍😍🙌🙌🙌
Loved reading
Also I think the format here is new.
Way to go 💚💚
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Yup, definitely just experimenting / trying something different. I’m not entirely convinced it works so I’m glad you liked it! 😊🖤
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😊😊😊🌺🌺
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Haven’t seen that from you before, nice! 👻
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Thanks! 👍 Just playing around really… 😊🖤
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Very good, that’s how the best things come to life 🙂 I wrote something about that recently.. I would tag you but I don’t know how that works here 😀
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Nor me! Ach, I’m sure I’ll come across your post at some point
👍🖤
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https://wp.me/p6Ssm6-dv there you go 🙂
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Great! 👍🖤
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I like how you took all the poetic allusions and yet your voice still shined through. Great poem!
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Thank you very much my friend! 👍
I’d love to say I was trying to juxtapose the classic with the modern or to highlight the call and response of the old and the new – but really I was just experimenting / messing about and this just sort of happened… 😁
I’m glad you liked it though! 🖤
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It worked really well either way
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🖤🖤
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