If I’m Honest

I
expected
better
from
you

I
thought
you at
least had
a backbone

I guess
you’ve
got more
to lose
than me

If
you had
to go
through
life alone

10 thoughts on “If I’m Honest”

varjakBaby says:

22/01/2020 at 6:04 am

This is fascinating. Multiple facets to the story.

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1. YouLittleCharmer says:
  
  22/01/2020 at 10:22 am
  
  Indeed there are.
  Thank you! 🖤
  
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EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen says:

22/01/2020 at 8:14 am

Been re-reading this a few times – the sign of poetry doing its thing.

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1. YouLittleCharmer says:
  
  22/01/2020 at 10:21 am
  
  Hopefully it is that and not my terrible sentence structure! 😳🖤
  
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  1. EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen says:
    
    22/01/2020 at 11:17 am
    
    Have confidence in your writing – you have a style, a way of using words that works…
    
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    1. YouLittleCharmer says:
      
      22/01/2020 at 5:44 pm
      
      Thank you my friend! 👍🖤
      
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Christopher Perry says:

23/01/2020 at 4:38 am

A beautifully succinct novel

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1. YouLittleCharmer says:
  
  23/01/2020 at 7:37 pm
  
  Why thank you! 👍
  If only I had a novel in me… 🖤
  
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Harley Unhinged says:

27/01/2020 at 3:50 pm

You tell em!

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1. YouLittleCharmer says:
  
  27/01/2020 at 6:17 pm
  
  I did!! 😁🖤
  
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