I
expected
better
from
you
I
thought
you at
least had
a backbone
I guess
you’ve
got more
to lose
than me
If
you had
to go
through
life alone
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
I
expected
better
from
you
I
thought
you at
least had
a backbone
I guess
you’ve
got more
to lose
than me
If
you had
to go
through
life alone
This is fascinating. Multiple facets to the story.
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Indeed there are.
Thank you! 🖤
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Been re-reading this a few times – the sign of poetry doing its thing.
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Hopefully it is that and not my terrible sentence structure! 😳🖤
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Have confidence in your writing – you have a style, a way of using words that works…
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Thank you my friend! 👍🖤
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A beautifully succinct novel
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Why thank you! 👍
If only I had a novel in me… 🖤
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You tell em!
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I did!! 😁🖤
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