I don’t
think
I have
anything
to say
Today
Perhaps
there
will be
more
sorrow
Tomorrow
So I
will
wait to
pick up
my pen
Then
For I
fear I
wouldn’t
even
know how
Now
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
I don’t
think
I have
anything
to say
Today
Perhaps
there
will be
more
sorrow
Tomorrow
So I
will
wait to
pick up
my pen
Then
For I
fear I
wouldn’t
even
know how
Now
What a great rythm! It’s great to write even when there’s no specific inspiration ๐
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Thanks!
Yes, just a wee play around this one really ๐๐ค
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Yeah it’s great when it feels like that :), results in original things.
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Absolutely ๐ค
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Well written, friend! The rhyme and meter are a unique and wonderfully executed choice
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Thank you so much! ๐
I was just playing around with this one so I’m glad it worked out ๐๐ค
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and just like that, you’ve said it.
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Something we all feel at times methinks ๐ค
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Perfect! Good flow and spot-on thoughts. ๐
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Thank you! I do try ๐๐ค
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This is masterfully executed. Well done my friend
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Thank you so much – chuffed you enjoyed reading them all!! ๐๐ค
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Reblogged this on I Write Her and commented:
Reading this, in what I think the tempo requires, you can really feel the lethargy and depression in this piece. It totally resonates with some moments I’ve experienced in my own life, how about yours?
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Thank you my friend!
You’re too kind! ๐๐ค
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You’re welcome! ๐
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you so much for the share my friend.
You’re too kind as always ๐๐ค
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Always happy to read and share great writing like this, Dear!
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