What will we do when this feud ends?
Just sit around and all be friends?
Forget the hatred and bile that’s been spilled,
And hope our relationships we can rebuild?
Well, it’s not for me,
You can count me out.
Of that there can be absolutely no doubt.
Because I will hold onto this grudge forever.
And I want nothing to do with you again whatsoever.
But clever!
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Why thank you ππ€
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I don’t usually point out typos, but noticed you did it in both places and you’re usually very accurate. In ‘feud’ the ‘e’ and ‘u’ are the other way around to here π.
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Thanks!!! All rectified! π
I really need to get better at proofreading before posting!!!
There’s been a few slip ups recently! ππ€
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No worries! π. I really hate to see a bad typo and I’m hypersensitive to themβ this wasn’t as bad as ones I often see. Like getting to the end of a really good, well-written post, and there’s an inappropriate “you’re” at the end…ouch!
Please do let me know if you see any in mine xD. Discovering them late is exactly the same as realising my fly was undone after public speaking.
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I love that analogy!! π€£
I’ll certainly keep an eye out! ππ€
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you gotta trim those nose hairs π this poem could easily be about me: the hurt we inflict on each other
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Absolutely.
I reckon it could be about any one of us (and our nose hairs! π) π€
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Different style than usual. I’m shook! (or whatever the kids say these days π )
Excellently written as usual π
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Shook, my friend?? Really? π
You must have seen this acerbic tone from me before, no?
I even managed to do it without expletives this time! π€£π€
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The style and tone I have seen.
The lack of expletives is the kicker π
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What can I say? I don’t know what the fuck came over me! π€£π€£π€
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