Evening:
You
really
are
amazing
He
said
That
was
the
best
yet
You
don’t
need
to tell
me
She
said
Now
pass
me a
cigarette
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
Evening:
You
really
are
amazing
He
said
That
was
the
best
yet
You
don’t
need
to tell
me
She
said
Now
pass
me a
cigarette
But smoking is injurious
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Indeed it is…
Sometimes, sadly, knowing that is not enough to say no though ππ€
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It’s difficult but not impossible
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Very true my friend, very true π€
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Lmao. You receive reviews?
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Your tags on this are so bloody explicit lol π€£.
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I know! π
I was quite proud of the tags in all three of these poems actually ππ€
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Oh I’ve always wondered, why do people smoke after sex? I would’ve thought cravings would be lower then, with all the dopamine from the sex!
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I wouldn’t know! ππ€
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Lmao! Me too π€£π
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This one is ABSOLUTELY not autobiographical! πππ€
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Don’t recollect (1) and (2) – story of my life – allegedly! (says he tongue in cheek)
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Haha! Trust you! π
I posted parts 1 and 2 of the trilogy earlier today – they aren’t much but probably add a bit of context to this one ππ€
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Read (1) and (2) now – a bit of context goes a long way…
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Indeed πππ€
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anticipation builds πthrough the day ππ₯π¬π¬
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Indeed!! π
I think I tried to capture that with parts 1 and 2 earlier today! ππ€
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Lol.
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ππ
Hopefully you got parts 1 and 2 from earlier today too ππ€
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No I didnβt actually. I read that there were rwo other Parts but with my blindness had a problem looking for them.
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Ah, I didn’t realise…I’m sorry.
To be fair you didn’t miss much, but they do add a little bit of back ground to this one.
They are not long. Would it help if I posted them here as a comment for you? π€
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Ooh yes please. Thanks. Or you can give me the link tobthem π
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I have no idea how to do links from my phone so I’ll just put them here for you…
The Messenger (1)
Morning:
I
enjoyed
chatting
with
you
Even
though
it was
through
a screen
Like an
impenetrable
wall of
concrete
With a
little
crack
inbetween
Twist My Arm (2)
Afternoon:
Drink
your
tea
Eat
your
food
Leave
behind
your
mournful
mood
Come
out
tonight
Have
some
fun
For
our
time
has
only
just
begun
Then we had number (3) so you know the rest! ππ€
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Oh wow. Theyβre good. I really like the format as it really draws out what you are saying. It kind of gives a slower pace to the action. I like it π
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Aw, you’re very kind thank you π
I was just playing around with them really, but it was fun to do something different.
If you ever need me to repost or clarify anything else that doesn’t appear easily just let me know.
It’s no problem at all ππ€
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Thankyou ever so much π
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You’re most welcome π€
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Marlboro
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Always ππ€
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That was quite the progression from morning to noon to night. I think the readers of your trilogy might need a cigarette themselves after reading them all, lol
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Haha!! You could be right! ππ€
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