Trauma

But
you
were
doing
so well

He
said

I
don’t
quite
understand

Coming
back
from
hell

She
said

Doesn’t
always
go to
plan

14 thoughts on “Trauma

    1. Indeed you can my friend – but only if you give me a little advice πŸ˜‰

      Originally, the last line was
      ‘Doesn’t always go as planned’ but I changed it to ‘Doesn’t always go to plan’ as you can see.

      Which do you think reads better?
      I’m still not sure! πŸ€”πŸ–€

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      1. Thanks. πŸ™‚ I like the way it is.. though both work. My advice? Once it’s done, put your energy into the next poem… πŸ™‚ I say this like it’s advice I am able to follow πŸ˜‰ All the best. Anytime you want to shoot questions my way, feel free. I am always open to discussing writing yet nobody really engages. (shrug). πŸ™‚

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        1. Aw that’s a shame!
          You clearly have a lot to offer in the way of advice. I’ll certainly bear that in mind 😊

          Usually, I do absolutely write and move on. But I literally just changed that line as I was scheduling the post last night. And as you are the only one to comment – and that you thought it worthy of a share – I thought I’d pick your brain! 😁

          Well, I’ll leave as is and please feel free to share away. Thank you so much for that.

          I love reading both yours and discovering the writings of others through your site πŸ‘πŸ–€

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  1. Ohhh this perfectly describes my final setback when staying with parents which led to them triggering the complete breakdown of it, and my period in the car πŸ˜†.

    “Coming
    back
    from
    hell

    She
    said

    Doesn’t
    always
    go to
    plan”

    This is very well said. If only they’d understood this…! Oh well!

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