Trauma But you were doing so well He said I don’t quite understand Coming back from hell She said Doesn’t always go to plan Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related 14 thoughts on “Trauma” May I share it? Cheers! LikeLiked by 3 people Indeed you can my friend – but only if you give me a little advice 😉 Originally, the last line was ‘Doesn’t always go as planned’ but I changed it to ‘Doesn’t always go to plan’ as you can see. Which do you think reads better? I’m still not sure! 🤔🖤 LikeLiked by 2 people Thanks. 🙂 I like the way it is.. though both work. My advice? Once it’s done, put your energy into the next poem… 🙂 I say this like it’s advice I am able to follow 😉 All the best. Anytime you want to shoot questions my way, feel free. I am always open to discussing writing yet nobody really engages. (shrug). 🙂 LikeLiked by 2 people Aw that’s a shame! You clearly have a lot to offer in the way of advice. I’ll certainly bear that in mind 😊 Usually, I do absolutely write and move on. But I literally just changed that line as I was scheduling the post last night. And as you are the only one to comment – and that you thought it worthy of a share – I thought I’d pick your brain! 😁 Well, I’ll leave as is and please feel free to share away. Thank you so much for that. I love reading both yours and discovering the writings of others through your site 👍🖤 LikeLiked by 1 person Never the plan. ❤️ Beautiful job! LikeLiked by 2 people Thank you my friend 🖤 LikeLiked by 1 person You’re welcome!!! LikeLiked by 1 person 🖤🖤 LikeLike This is wonderful and really fits with my situation at the moment following a huge upset. I’ve saved it so I can re-read it. Perfect. LikeLiked by 3 people Thank you, that’s very kind. I hope you find it of some use 🖤 LikeLiked by 1 person I absolutely loveeee this onee!!! LikeLiked by 2 people Brilliant! Thank you so much! 👍🖤 LikeLike Ohhh this perfectly describes my final setback when staying with parents which led to them triggering the complete breakdown of it, and my period in the car 😆. “Coming back from hell She said Doesn’t always go to plan” This is very well said. If only they’d understood this…! Oh well! LikeLiked by 1 person Sometimes folks just don’t get it. Not their fault, I suppose, but it certainly doesnt help 🖤 LikeLiked by 1 person Comments are closed.