Looking up to the sky
This foreboding feeling grows
As I see the unkindness of ravens
And hear the murder of crows
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
Looking up to the sky
This foreboding feeling grows
As I see the unkindness of ravens
And hear the murder of crows
Ramblings Of A Fragile Mind 
Pinned to the ground,
By unfriendly spear,
No help to be found,
The end is near.🤠🔥
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Love it 👍🖤
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The cruel cackle of geese, a sharp shrill of owl, chanting kill, kill, kill
😉
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Terrifying 👍🖤
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as vultures await to pick their bones, tasty morsels their delight. 😉🖤🖤
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Indeed!
I think I wrote a poem about vultures once…
Seems I have more of a fear of birds than I thought 😬🖤
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Don’t ever watch THAT movie! By Hitchcock!! 😅😳
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I think that’s where the fear started!! 😬😬🖤
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Oh!!! I feel you there!!! I’m still a bit paranoid around flocks of birds!!! 😬🤫
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Absolutely!! 🙈🖤
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Noisy beggars those crows!
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The seagulls are worse! 🙉😬🖤
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😂
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😁🖤
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Those words put together makes the atmosphere heavy.
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Yep, it’s been a heavy atmosphere around here today 🖤🖤
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The thick sky is torn apart by a strike of lightning blade.
Smoke filled heaven fell on earth and broke the tight chest.
None is harmed except a few greying chest hair.
Life is good!
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Love this!! 👍👍🖤🖤
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🤎🤎
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🖤🖤
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Wow, so well written Charmer! The heaviness in this really transfers to the reader.
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Thank you my friend! 😁
This was one of those that came (almost) too easily but thankfully turned out okay! 👍🖤
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this is very ominous indeed —
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I’m glad I managed to pull it off 👍🖤
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Loved this! Dark and foreboding 🙂
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Thank you my friend 👍
I’m glad you thought so 🖤
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Bleak yet intriguing – can totally imagine a dark stormy day in a graveyard with these gathering in the wintery trees. 🙂
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Or even in a snowstorm… If the latest forcasts are to be believed 👍🖤
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Very gothic vibes from this- cracking stuff!
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😁😁🖤
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Glorious collective nouns
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I can’t take credit for them… Just the words around… 😉🖤
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