Call me your sweetheart again
She said
And I’ll punch you in the face
For you never earned that right
She said
In the first fucking place
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
Call me your sweetheart again
She said
And I’ll punch you in the face
For you never earned that right
She said
In the first fucking place
Ramblings Of A Fragile Mind 
Wow! this packs a wallop ! a whole childhood of mistreatment or neglect in these lines !
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Absolutely π€π€
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Raw and powerful stuff, Charmer! Plenty of unspoken backstory packed into such short lines.
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Thank you my friend π€
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π¨π¨π ooft! As You would say. π
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Umβ¦my parent comment disappeared, now it just looks like I was correcting you instead of myselfβ¦π€. How many comments do you see from me?
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Alright what I said was:
π¨π¨π ooft! As you would say. π
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Don’t worry – one of them had disappeared into spam, but I fixed it πππ€
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