This is an interpolation
Or is it just out and out theft
Either way we know
Without the modifications below
That my lines would be bereft
Something Old / Something New
I wandered lonely as a cloud
Screaming the words fuck you out loud
As, like the night, she walked in beauty
I wished someone would just come along and shoot me
As I, in the wood, took the road less travelled
I sat and cried as my mind unravelled
And as we talked between the rooms
I closed my eyes and succumbed to the fumes
(Originally Posted 29.10.2019)
Oops. too anxious little finger
‘I closed my eyes and succumbed to the fumes
Good heavens……..
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I know, right? I forget, sometimes, how brutal some of these old posts are! 😳🖤
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If what you write doesn’t pull at the emotions and express exactly what you are feeling at the time then you have failed as a writer. Brutal or otherwise. You know what I mean……
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I certainly do my friend 👍🖤
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It’s a vicious downward spiral that’s so difficult to climb out of. ❤ Powerful heart-wrenching verses.
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Thank you my friend 🖤🖤
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