One step
Two step
Three step
Four
Just
Keep
Walking
To
The
Door
Five step
Six step
Seven step
Eight
You
Will
Never
Be
My
Soul
Mate
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
One step
Two step
Three step
Four
Just
Keep
Walking
To
The
Door
Five step
Six step
Seven step
Eight
You
Will
Never
Be
My
Soul
Mate
Ramblings Of A Fragile Mind 
Wow.
Great poetry. Very subtle way of showing the door to someone.
Good luck with those auditions. Hope you don’t get it wrong when identifying – or letting go of a soulmate. that would be quite sad.
😦
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Sadly there’s no danger of either nowadays… 😔🖤
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sorry to hear.
been there too.
one gets tired of waiting when your message does not seem to get through.
hope you don’t regret anything and that it works out well for you.
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Aw, thank you.
Well meaning and well written.
That means a lot 👍🖤
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“very subtle” 🤣
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yeah well. that was really meant in a quite sad ironic way. so subtle it hurts. truth.
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Made me laugh. But maybe that shouldn’t be my reaction. This has some simmering sadness in it as well. And maybe relief, too. It takes awhile to find the right one, it seems.
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Happiness / Sadness – Both sides of the same coin I guess…
Certainly in my writing anyway! 👍🖤
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It is. Both are on the same staircase, just a few steps away from each other.
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I think I’d rather take the lift! 😕🖤
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Nine
step
then
ten…
Don’t
bloody
come
back
again!
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😂😂 Totally!!
Love these little comment collabs!! 😁🖤
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I did not know where this was going and really loved the ending 😆
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Thanks so much.
Glad to have raised a smile 😁🖤
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Needs a ‘m8’ on the end 😄.
It’s great! Cute and aggressive at the same time! 💙
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Just like Misty. Not really, she’s just cute 😍.
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And cute 😍
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Me in a nutshell, eh? 😉🖤
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She’s turned the we’ans agenst us!!
🤣💙
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😂🖤
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Charmer-inspired poem!—
You can’t
Fix
Your
Issues
With
A
Green
screen
It’s all
Jagged
Around
The edges
Tidy
Your
Fucking
Room!
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Appropriate poem to comment this on, haha!
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Haha, your style is honestly satisfying, not easy to replicate and uniquely-cutting! The rate at which you produce such concise and biting thoughts is truly original haha.
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Oh I dunno, your response poem here is pretty good! 😁🖤
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Thank you! Lol. Well, it was still difficult though! I had no idea how to format it 😅.
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HTML is my best friend 😉🖤
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Haha! Seriously? That’s cool! Well, I meant just in relation to the best places to break the lines :D.
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If you’re writing in HTML maybe that’s why your posts are always short… 😅.
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There must be like… s everywhere 😆
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There must be like s everywhere 😆*
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BRs! the BR tags!! I was trying to write it lol
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😂😂 HTML is great fun!
As for the breaks try to keep to specific patterns of numbers of words on each line / in each verse so that it ‘looks right’ to my eye.
Sometimes I nail it – other times it’s there sticking out like a sore thumb to me for all eternity! 😉🖤
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As we go, nearer the door,
Sit near the phone
when you want more.
You parade me about
As of I were a meme,
Where else will you go,
To buy your Ice Cream?
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To be fair I would consider loves young dream
For an endless supply of pistachio ice cream!!
😁🖤
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Oh, friend, count those steps back,
Say you are sorry, be on right track.
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🤞🖤
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