You
pulled
me into
your
orbit
And
then you
promptly
jumped ship
I will
never
forgive
you for
that
You
fucking
piece
of shit
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
You
pulled
me into
your
orbit
And
then you
promptly
jumped ship
I will
never
forgive
you for
that
You
fucking
piece
of shit
Ramblings Of A Fragile Mind 
The pain of a heartbreak is clearly evident in every word of he poem.and the bitterness too.May God give u the strngth to overcome the breakup and help you find happiness in life..
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Thank you 🖤🖤
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You will find someone better. 👍😊
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Wise words 🖤
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😁
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If you’re anything like me best not to take too literally, yet a thread of truth in there somewhere… maybe.
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Indeed, they are not all meant to be taken too literally – but the threads are everywhere… 🖤🖤
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I love how your writing’s so raw
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Thank you – too raw at times perhaps!
But that’s very kind of you to say 🖤
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No. Raw writing is the most appropriate form of direct expression. It was my pleasure🖤
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Aw thank you! I still worry that my writing is not as lyrical as others, and therefore rubbish, so it’s nice to see you appreciate it 😁🖤
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Then you must better stop worrying because it’s not at all rubbish.
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🖤🖤
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Ahaha! This one has sass.
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Thank you!! 😁🖤
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LOL *again*
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Amazing as usual ♥️🖤
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Thank you my friend. I hope you are well 🖤🖤
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I don’t know what’s wrong with me because I feel the similar pain that’s behind this poem, but the last line made me laugh hard again.
Your punch lines as rhymes are brilliant! :3
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Thanks! I like to mix it up a bit sometimes 😉🖤
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