I should
have been
more careful
with what
I wished forBecause
I never
wanted it
to end like
this at all
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
I should
have been
more careful
with what
I wished forBecause
I never
wanted it
to end like
this at all
Actions and reactions, cause and effect, consequences. Them old tales scared me away from wishing. Nice poem.
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Thanks! 😁
Yup, wishing only really works in story books… 🖤
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You’ve seen the new live action Aladdin I take it
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Haha, obviously! 👍 I kind of liked it to be fair. Will Smith did a decent job – but no one will ever beat Robin Williams 🖤
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Emotional reading as ever
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Thank you, you’re very kind 🖤
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An ominous ending.
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Ominous indeed…
Guess folk will have to write their own conclusion to this one… 🖤
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Strong and impressive poetry! If we only understand the magnitude of these words, before it is too late.Great job!
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Thank you, that’s very kind. I appreciate your kind words 🖤🖤
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