All
you
do is
bitch
and
moan
And I
listen
with
a sigh
For
you can’t
see what’s
right in
front of
you
Life,
passing
you by
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
All
you
do is
bitch
and
moan
And I
listen
with
a sigh
For
you can’t
see what’s
right in
front of
you
Life,
passing
you by
This spoke to me, directly.
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Thank you, I do try 😉🖤
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Dare I offer, “…Your life is passing by” as a possible tweak? Dare I 😱
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What exactly is it about me that screams unapproachable??!! 🤣🤣
To be fair, you’re right. Your version does scan better.
Dare I change it though? Dare I?
😉🖤
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😁🖤
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