Look Out!

Falling

Tumbling

Through the air

Wondering

What it’s like

Down there

People standing

With faces aghast

Yet I don’t care

As I breathe my last

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  1. Hmmm! Faintly similar to what I pictured in suicidal ideations. May as well be dramatic and fool-proof, right? 😆

    Haha the title has really made me laugh very sardonically. That is really incongruous against the contents of the poem, lol. I love it.

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  2. Wow. I honestly did not see that last line coming. Now I’m wondering who shouted the title. It kind of changes how you look at the narrative if it’s the crowd or the narrator.

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