Remember when I told you
I wished that I was dead
And you thought it was all
Just nonsense in my head
Well maybe now you’ll realise
You will finally get to see
The worst thing that you ever did
Was not to believe me
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
Remember when I told you
I wished that I was dead
And you thought it was all
Just nonsense in my head
Well maybe now you’ll realise
You will finally get to see
The worst thing that you ever did
Was not to believe me
Sounds ominous……
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Yup… Can’t be like that some days 😒🖤
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Up and down hey?…..
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Yeah, it has been. Summer is always a bit like this for me, sure it’ll level out 👍🖤
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Hang in there……
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Certainly trying 🖤🖤
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Good girl……
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This is so powerful!
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Thank you 🖤🖤
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😌💙
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Ramblings of a fragile mind from beyond the grave. A posthumous collection 🤔💚
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Hitting shelves in 2022! 😒
(P. S. I’m fine) 🖤🖤
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I don’t doubt that. You’re stronger than your writing let’s on 😉💚
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Maybe 😉🖤
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Aww🖤
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A truly depressing poem on multiple levels–the narrator and her struggle, the one being addressed and their closed mindedness, and the idea that it has to end in such a way. That’s far too steep a price to prove someone wrong.
Hopefully she’ll stick around to see them proved wrong in other ways 🙂🖤
Also, this is a well-written poem with great rhythm and flow!
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Thank you.
I’m sure she’ll heed your sage advice my friend, whoever she is
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💙😣🥺🖤
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