Hmm, coincidence, I’ve just read another poem about the same topic and I just finished writing about losing the disillusionment. You’re not alone. Great short poem. A lot of power in so few words.
That’s very kind of you – thank you for your encouragement. I’ve been a little blindsided by a darker day than usual today so it’s a comfort to think that my words still make some kind of sense and that it’s not just me that struggles with these things… 🖤
Ofcourse not, we all go through struggles, some struggles of people are tougher than other ones but it is still a strugle. Life is a strugle, so I just keep the chin up and keep on waking up at 7 a.m. And most of the times with a smile on the face.
A great poem by the way, well written and powerful.
I knew as one who had lied to my face for 5 yrs after he maliciously stole my only means of sustaining my small family. His lies didn’t sting as much as the false care and shoulder he’d offer to let me cry on [for the damage he created in my life] ……to whom I never suspected it had been him that whole time. The masks of protection of your own nature is no fraud…those whom wear them to deceive & manipulate & continue to use others are the flaws in their character…..I hope you are not of the ladder much love.
Ramblings Of A Fragile Mind 
Hmm, coincidence, I’ve just read another poem about the same topic and I just finished writing about losing the disillusionment. You’re not alone. Great short poem. A lot of power in so few words.
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That’s very kind of you – thank you for your encouragement. I’ve been a little blindsided by a darker day than usual today so it’s a comfort to think that my words still make some kind of sense and that it’s not just me that struggles with these things… 🖤
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Nah you’re not alone. Others walk in these shadows with you. Take care my friend. Here’s to hoping we both find the light. 🌻
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I do hope so 🖤
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Ofcourse not, we all go through struggles, some struggles of people are tougher than other ones but it is still a strugle. Life is a strugle, so I just keep the chin up and keep on waking up at 7 a.m. And most of the times with a smile on the face.
A great poem by the way, well written and powerful.
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Thank you my friend, that means a lot to me today 🖤
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Nice turn of phrase. I misread the first time, for some reason my brain changed the word to to on. Changes the whole poem 🤣❤️
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It certainly does! If only I’d thought of that… 😉🖤
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I knew as one who had lied to my face for 5 yrs after he maliciously stole my only means of sustaining my small family. His lies didn’t sting as much as the false care and shoulder he’d offer to let me cry on [for the damage he created in my life] ……to whom I never suspected it had been him that whole time. The masks of protection of your own nature is no fraud…those whom wear them to deceive & manipulate & continue to use others are the flaws in their character…..I hope you are not of the ladder much love.
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Definitely not the latter… More just that it’s hard to keep up the pretence that you’re doing OK sometimes, when in reality you feel anything but…🖤
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very much relating! My heart goes out to you
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Thank you friend 🖤
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Appreciate your expression into the form of art…..you are talented in your expression for sure. I hope a healing path is fruitful!
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Thank you 🖤
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