At
this
point
I’ll
try
anything
She
said
It
can’t
do any
harm
Then
you
should
take
this
one
He
said
It’ll
work
like a
charm
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
"All my life's buried here, heap earth upon it"
At
this
point
I’ll
try
anything
She
said
It
can’t
do any
harm
Then
you
should
take
this
one
He
said
It’ll
work
like a
charm
😢🖤
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Just the way I feel today 😔🖤
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🤗
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Thank you my friend 👍🖤
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None needed, some days all we need is a hug and nothing said.
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Very true 🖤
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😢😢😢
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Some days are harder than others 🖤
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They surely are. You poured out your emotions so well 💕
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Thank you my friend 🖤
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Can I laugh? That is so darkly humourous whilst of course being sad, which goes without saying!
I hope that you can take comfort in knowing that from the sadness does come some amazing lines…!
My laughter is a way of respecting your situation too— allowing some good to come of it and from your creative energies.
💙💙💙
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Of course you can laugh! You can react however you like 😊
Some of the darker stuff I write can have a (somewhat twisted) humerous side at times which is most certainly a longstanding coping mechanism of mine.
Some folks get it – some folks don’t. Either way it’s grand.
I know how I write, and more importantly what I express, helps me to deal with my struggles so that’s always my main objective.
I’m just chuffed other folks think it’s worthy of reading so I’m happy with any response they have to give!
😊🖤
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Thanks for the reassurance! I will go back to trusting my instincts then :D. That was nice to hear some more of the background to it :).
Keep writing! 😄💙
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Always go with your gut, and I’ll certainly try to 😁🖤
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These lines clearly show how you felt when you wrote them….it has this great appeal coz I can so much relate to it….and I’m sure many others can as well….sometimes the days are darker than the nights….so it’s better to accept & surrender than to fight….coz that’ll help in dissolving this bitter bite like a pure delight….I hope you know what I mean ❤️✨
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Aw, thank you my friend.
You’re too kind.
I love it when someone replies in rhyme… Especially one so beautiful!
😁👍🖤
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You’re welcome, however it’s you, who’s so kind….by riding these beautiful lines….they penetrate the core in no time….you see, darkness has a very special shine….one needs to walk-in to see its light….the stars look so beautiful in the very dark nights….thank you for letting me reply in this form of rhyme ✨🙏🖤❤️
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You are most welcome anytime.
You’re lyrical, flowing and rhythmic style is such a contrast to my sharp and heavy thudding…
I’m very jealous 😉🖤
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Oh, you must know that I really like your style…..the imagery is so powerful….that’s why I got hit by your Shotgun….& by that I mean your poem….your pen….your style….it’s unique ✨🖤
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Again, too kind.
But thank you! 🖤
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